Brian_5_I

OK, I have been so negitive in my last several posts, I will try to pick out something nice to say.

It was interesting--and as she mentioned, slightly counter-intuitive--when she suggested that the more detailed your description is in your story, the more the audience can relate to the incident.

I always tend to avoid details in descriptions when I'm hoping people will identify with my situation. Perhaps I should re-think the plan.